Nicole Larissa Apollymi

{Basic(s)}
Name: Nicole Larissa Apollymi
Nickname(Optional): Nikki/Apollymi/Phoenix
Age: 18
Race/Species: African/Dark Phoenix/Vampire
Sexual Orientation:straight
Hometown:Africa, Kenya
Occupation: N/A

{Physical}
Eyes:blue/sliver
Hair:sliver
Body: (( Has a tattoo of a phoenix on my chest (( the tattoo will occasionally move ))
Face: (( markings appears when anger))
Height:5'7
Weight: 125

{Personality}
keeps to myself mostly, I'm very quiet but i will speak my mind. its hard to for me to trust someone or to open up due to my past, i only trust Grim for he was always there for me and he will never betray me. i love to laugh because sometimes it lifts the heaviness from my heart. i love reading romance novels. I'm weary of falling in love it brings to much heartache and i doubt that my heart could take it..though i would like to know what true love is. I'm always helping out the underdog i hate when someone picks on someone smaller then them...i really don't have much faith in anything except in God but for a while i lost faith in him too but that didn't last long since I'm still alive. i fear no man...the only thing i fear on this earth is myself.
{Background}
Born on 9/11/90 in Kenya, Africa to a Ashanti tribe. that was the day my father tried to kill me but my mother protected me from him. i was born with blue/sliver eyes and silver hair which is the mark of the Dark Phoenix a powerful ancient spirit. Anyways that was the reason why my father tried to kill me. "she will be the death of our peoples" that was what my father told my mother but she didn't listen to him...i wonder if my mother would have let my father killed me, if she knew he was right...I was 10 yrs old when it happen again. it was a month later after my mother death, the pain was still raw from losing her...she was the only one that loved me and wasn't afraid of me. i loved her and also hated her because left me all alone. their was no one to protect me anymore...and my father knew that or so he thought...he had the whole tribe throw stones at me. i thought i was going to die and i welcome it. but then i felt IT the Dark Phoenix spirit deep inside me, IT rages became my own.i black out from the power of the Dark Phoenix...but when i woke up not a living soul was found saved my own. A year later i met Grim, i was traveling around Europe living on the streets. i saw Grim surrounded by four vampires, he was doing good on his own but four to one just didn't seem fair to me so i lend a hand. after the vampires were killed, Grim pledge himself to me..by pledging himself to me, Grim has bonded with me..thanking me for helping him. Grim looks a lot older then me, he looks like he 17 but he has a child like mind of 6 yr old.. his kind the Charonte demons are fighters they age a lot slower then any other race, the Charontes bond by placing themselves as a tattoo on their master body and from their place,they can feel, hear, and see whatever their master does unless they shut it out. Grim was all alone in the world just like me..but now we are not alone anymore because we have each other, since then Grim never left my side. Grim lives on my body as a tattoo he only appears when i'm in danger or near death or i can summon him to human form by saying the spell Kieko's Gemella. just recently i was bitten and turned by a vampire, long story short i was at the wrong place at the wrong time.
{Appearance}
[Only admins are allowed to see this image] Ohhh!! lets not forget about Grim lol Grim is my Charonte demon he appears as a tattoo on my body . [Only admins are allowed to see this image]

This application needs work. You NEED to have a background, you need to elaborate more on your personality. Who the hell is Grim? Explain what he is, how he works, and why you have him.

There are some flaws in your background, you said the day you were born your father tried to kill you, but then you said you were 10 years old when it happened. So unless you meant you were 10 when your mother died, or he tried to kill you at both those ages, it doesn't make sense. Also why does Grim live in a tattoo on your body? Was he not a living person before you met him? Why did suddenly become one with you? And as for summoning Grim, it should take some sort of channeling spell to bring him into reality, this way in if you were in the middle of a spar or fight you can't just summon him out of the blue and gang up on your opponent, you'd have to be put into danger/Injured/near death before he could come out. Everything else on your application is fine though, just answer some of those questions for me. Let me know when you have done this so I can come back and read it over again.

Approved.

Mmm you people check out my profile but you don't leave any comments!!! >.> bastards... and i mean that in a nice way XD

yea i know they dont have to leave comments >.> i was joking lol well kinda and thanks XD