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Elena Giltodo
Posts : 1 Join date : 2009-08-20 Age : 29 Location : Ledyard
| Subject: Elena Giltodo' Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:18 pm | |
| Name: Elena Giltodo' Age:15 Race/Species:Super Human Sexual Orientation:Staight Hometown: Hudson, New Hamshire
{Physical} Eyes: Chocolate Brown. Hair: Dark Brown Staight/Curly Hair Body: Model Like/ Beautiful Height:5'8 Weight:99
{Personality} Elena could get a guy in minutes with her un-bareable beauty. She caring,Kind, And gifted. She talks to anyone she sees and loves to make new friends. She acts nice all the time but she's got a dark side. Elena is Half cold hearted. Half Warm Gendered. Shes forever in deepth with herself and she cares more about herself than anyone. Shes a girl with different emotions around her.
{Background} Elena past was hazey. She grew up in hudson, NH with her mother and brother Evan. Elena and Evan were twins. Her father left her mother after the two were born and elena never meet her father. She was heart broken. She lived a normal life till the age of 10. Everytime she touched someone.. She could see there mood, Aura and what there thinking. Elena never wanted to touch anyone again. Five years later her mother passed on and her and evan lived alone in a big house in the mountains in hudson. Her father sent money but no reply address. She always wondered what happened to him. Her and evan fought over and over. One day he slapped her and she just lost it. Her power killed her brother. She ran away to The hamptons and stayed there. She got a letter from Academy of the Night.. She had a bad feeling this had something to do with her brothers and mother death. She knew her father had been watching. She had dreams about the day evan died and never slept. She knew evan would come back some how. And her father... Somehow.. Will come into her life. Will everything end?
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| | | Rammstein
Posts : 236 Join date : 2009-08-18 Age : 32 Location : Florida, USA
| Subject: Re: Elena Giltodo' Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:39 pm | |
| Your background doesn't make much sense, it's very vague. So is your personality, that hardly describes how your character acts during social interactions. Also add a picture onto the appearance, I see you have one for your avatar, but you should add to your application. If you are confused, ask away. | |
| | | Pretty.Little.Mistake
Posts : 427 Join date : 2009-08-18 Age : 31 Location : Ireland
| Subject: RE: The other Leah. Thu Aug 20, 2009 7:06 pm | |
| >< Does there have to be two Leah's? There's plenty more names in the world... | |
| | | Pretty.Little.Mistake
Posts : 427 Join date : 2009-08-18 Age : 31 Location : Ireland
| Subject: RE: Leah Ryokia-Rose Fri Aug 21, 2009 4:39 am | |
| unrealistic.entity/Sky; is ill but she says you have to change your name upon her order.
(I'm not being bitchy because I'm the other Leah, she just doesn't want an overlap of names.)
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| | | Pretty.Little.Mistake
Posts : 427 Join date : 2009-08-18 Age : 31 Location : Ireland
| Subject: RE: Elena Giltodo' Sat Aug 22, 2009 8:32 pm | |
| Much better, the background is ok.. but you need to explain WHY she is super human.
The personality section.. makes very little sense. | |
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